chapter 0 : page 26

February 24th, 2012, 12:03 pm

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Reply Archie The RedCat, February 24th, 2012, 12:03 pm

people gave me input about the background..
I know Im suck.. but I cant keep avoiding it..
urghhh ;A;

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Reply Lolychan, February 24th, 2012, 1:03 pm

Awesome! Ur backgrounds are very nice and accurate and I don't think they suck.

Ur style is amazing! So plz continue!

Also I love the evil hot duo!

Reply Archie The RedCat, February 24th, 2012, 6:58 pm

@Lolychan: Thank you for the support! I appreciated it so much ! >..<
I will continue, please keep reading!

Reply kabutoottonin, February 29th, 2012, 1:21 pm

found this today, and I wish I could draw like you!
looking forward to more!

Reply Vegan Atheist, March 4th, 2012, 1:51 am

I love this manga! I found this yesterday and started reading it today. I've got to admit that you've talent. :3 I don't want to offend you, but there's just one flaw in your work: grammar mistakes. (>///<) If you don't mind, I can help you edit the language in the pages. :)

Reply Archie The RedCat, March 4th, 2012, 1:59 am

@Vegan Atheist: thank you very much.. for wanted to help me,
actually I already get a help from someone with the grammar in this comic..

myself are not good in English..

so I dunno which grammar is better.. are everybody have different perspective with grammar? O_O I dont understand..

Reply sekichiku, March 7th, 2012, 2:39 pm

are you not a professional manga artist?? *o* your style,the tones,inking and everything is awesome! :D
btw,what's your native language?your english is kinda off hehe ^^;;

Reply Andrea C.Castro, March 12th, 2012, 3:46 am

@sekichiku: hey do you wanna read my comic??

Reply neopanda89, March 14th, 2012, 12:17 am

Hello, I just started reading your comic today (:

I truly love the concept and where this is going so far, I really hope you continue!

I think that your backgrounds are just fine as well, it would take away from your characters if they were too detailed or 'perfect'.

And, it is not at all hard to understand some of the panels, but it seems the problem has to do with the words "is, are, does" and how they are used. It's really not uncommon (: If you want I am sure some of us would gladly preview the page for you and let you know if some changes should be made.

Reply Archie The RedCat, March 14th, 2012, 12:34 am

@neopanda89: thank you very much.. ^^ the truth is, I already have someone who fixed the text for me..
Myself dont know English verymuch ^^

Reply PoBoRo (Guest), March 14th, 2012, 4:42 am

@Archie The RedCat: I was referred here from deviantArt. I really like the comic and where it's going!
But I'm afraid I have to agree with some of the other comments. "Are" is being used in the wrong context.
There's a scene a few pages back where Sin says "The condition are secret". It makes no sense. It should say "The condition is secret".

I know you have someone who fixes the dialogue for you, but they aren't fixing it properly. A lot of the text doesn't make sense I'm afraid :(

But everything else is really good! Keep it up!

Reply Archie The RedCat, March 15th, 2012, 9:17 am

@PoBoRo (Guest) : thank you for the input, but I cant find the text you are referring..

do you mean page 21
when Sin say : "this matter are a secret "
so I have to change it into "the condition is secret"

before the current person who help me on the grammar, earlier I have 2 different person that also help me corrected the grammar.

then I realize even many people are willing to help me corrected the text, there always be someone who will corrected the text again and again.

I dunno if its make sense or not.
but I have to trust the person that I choose to help me with this.
if not the text will keep changing..and changing and changing...

so please for everyone who read this..
bare the grammar mistake please.
me and my grammar assistants are trying our best to provide you a readable webcomic.

if the grammar mistake make you uncomfortable with it. than Im terrible sorry.
but this is how my webcomic will be.
with or without grammar mistake

please understand my decision ^^


Reply Andrea C.Castro, April 1st, 2012, 12:17 pm

ehyn you will update o.o??

Reply Teage Dunsten (Guest), July 3rd, 2012, 12:59 pm

Hay. I was just wondering if you wanted to continue this webcomic. Just interested, not pressuring.

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